Will you please proofread it? ( for any grammatical and vocabulary mistakes) thanks in advance
I can't stand this situation anymore, My heart... Oh my heart is now just like a biiig puzzle since it has broken to many parts of misery... I wanna get rid of some people & put them out of my heaven of peace... One day I may leave this disgusting town with all its lies, treasons, jealousies, disturbs & darn weather whose autumn belongs only to my rains of tear & winter to my huge avalanches of bad adventures. I'm too lonely to take a hand & too exhausted to stay in here. I may fly to my dreams by attempt wings... One day... I used to forgive & forget. Now, it's time neither forgive, nor forget. I love my twenty thus, it's time to live my own life. No need to permit anyone, I have the permission of the Lord
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Will you please proofread it? ( for any grammatical and vocabulary mistakes) thanks in advance
I can't stand this situation anymore, My heart... Oh my heart is now just like a biiig puzzle since it has broken to many parts of misery... I wanna get rid of some people & put them out of my heaven of peace... One day I may leave this disgusting town with all its lies, treasons, jealousies, disturbs & darn weather whose autumn belongs only to my rains of tear & winter to my huge avalanches of bad adventures. I'm too lonely to take a hand & too exhausted to stay in here. I may fly to my dreams by attempt wings... One day... I used to forgive & forget. Now, it's time neither forgive, nor forget. I love my twenty thus, it's time to live my own life. No need to permit anyone, I have the permission of the Lord