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Please edit my letter

Please edit my letter

Could someone correct my letter..please!
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Dear Dr S.....

Firstly I want to introduce myself. My name is Mica and I am from Slowakia-small european country. I got your email address from Dr. Gavin Sandercoe, plastic surgeon.
I am writing to enquire if there is possibility to spend two months in Sydney Melanoma unit to acquire some skills in diagonosis and treatment of melanoma.
I am in the learning process of specialisation for dermatologist.Now I am in the second year of specialisation. Australia has the highest incidence of melanoma in the world and it is also leading the world in the fight against melanoma. That the reason why I want to learn from experienced doctors in unit where dealing with melanoma is every day issue.
I have friend Eva, who was in Australia for 8 months and she was enraptured with your learning system in your country. So she inspired me to do the same.

If you see some possibility for me, please contact me. I will also enclose my CV.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely