"Official results were being released Monday for the legislative election, which followed a week of demonstrations and hunger strikes at Hong Kong's government offices, culminating in tens of thousands of protesters Friday night."
The modifier "for the legislative election" seems to modify "official results". But is it dangling, because it is separated from "official results" by "were being released Monday"?
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"Official results were being released Monday for the legislative election, which followed a week of demonstrations and hunger strikes at Hong Kong's government offices, culminating in tens of thousands of protesters Friday night."
The modifier "for the legislative election" seems to modify "official results". But is it dangling, because it is separated from "official results" by "were being released Monday"?